चार लोग क्या कहेंगे… – A Poem from a Goan Retreat

Goa; the very name usually rings a stereotypical bell in our minds of beaches, beer, and the carefree hippie life. But Goa has so much more to offer if you take a moment to look beyond the obvious. It’s a place where flavors, art, and rhythm come together in a vibrant celebration of creativity.

There’s food that can dazzle your taste buds, music that makes your feet move on their own, and artists who breathe life into ideas, by painting them on canvas, shaping them into sculptures, and building mesmerizing installations.

This year, I attended the Goa edition of the Blogchatter Retreat like my annual ritialistic trip. I arrived a couple of days early to indulge in a bit of solo travel and explore the local art scene. One of my memorable stops was the Museum of Goa, curated by Dr. Subodh Kerkar.

Among the many artworks, a particular set of paintings depicting human heads; caught my attention and set my mind in motion. The reflections that followed took shape as a free verse, which I’m sharing below.

चार लोग क्या कहेंगे..

हर बार जब भी मैं सोचता हु कुछ अलग करने का,

जमाने की सोच से हटके।

कोई नई रह चलने के लिए कदम उठाया ही था,

के हल्की सी आवाज कानों में गूंजी।

“ये तुम क्या करने जा रहे हो।

चार लोग क्या कहेंगे, ये भी तो सोचो।”

वैसे कमरे में तो मैं अकेला ही था,

फिर भी कोनों में गूंजी ही रही थी वो आवाज और,

अब तो महसूस भी हो रही है, 

मुझ पर गड़ी वो आंखे…

जो गौर कर रहीं है, की मै क्या करता हु।

वरना वो कैसे तय करेंगे,

“चार लोग क्या कहेंगे…”

आदित्य साठे 

१७/०९/२०२५


This post is a part of Blogchatter Half Marathon 2025. For more posts, click here.

This blog post is part of ‘Blogaberry Dazzle’ hosted by Cindy D’Silva and Noor Anand Chawla in collaboration with Ratna Prabha.


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14 responses to “चार लोग क्या कहेंगे… – A Poem from a Goan Retreat”

  1. Suchita Avatar

    The bane of our creativity is ye char log jo koi nahin janta kaun hai and kyun hai. Love the poem.

    1. chandrika130652fb184600 Avatar
      chandrika130652fb184600

      Good poem Aditya.

  2. Preeti Chauhan Avatar
    Preeti Chauhan

    Ye char log kabhi sath main nahi mile kahin 🙂
    Bahut hi saralta aur sateekta se apni baat rakh dete ho Aditya !

  3. Romila Chitturi Avatar

    Your recounting of Goa’s charm through the “Char Log” lens is truly delightful. You’ve captured how simple moments, chatting with locals, discovering hidden lanes, and soaking in the vibe – add up to the essence of travel. Thanks for this easy, genuine invitation to explore differently.

  4. Samata Avatar

    Aha you been to Goa Museum… I am sure it was an awesome experience. Is that boat with so many dolls on board still there in the museam. I just love the tour of the museam. Incrediable experience for me.

  5. Varsh Avatar

    I want to find those chaar log and give them a piece of my mind. Jeeyo aur jeene do! Loved the artwork. Museum visit during your solo travel? You’re so much like me!

  6. Ambica Gulati Avatar

    Very apt, Who are these ‘chaar log’. And why does it matter what they say. I feel like exploring Goa with fresh eyes again.

  7. Reubenna Dutta Avatar

    A painting so beautifully described! Truly, our inner voice is the loudest, and we really need to ignore it and do what makes us happy and alive.

  8. Meetalikutty Avatar
    Meetalikutty

    Really enjoyed reading this piece, you made the spirit of Goa feel real. It’s nice to see a poem written with the spirit of freedom in mind

  9. Janaki Avatar

    Interesting thought. Beautiful artwork. Pata nahi woh chaar log kab jayenge; lagta hai unse pehle mein hi chali jaungi bina kuch karke, bas yeahi sochke ki woh chaar log kya kahenge 🙁

  10. Wordamithkaur Avatar

    Ye chaar log hamari life control karte hain! Accha ya bura ye log kuch to kahenge. After turning 60, I finally decided that -kehne do..kya hi karlenge ab!

  11. booknerdsamee Avatar

    Being a Goan I loved how you talked about the real Goa. Thank you for sharing!

  12. booknerdsamee Avatar

    Being a Goan this blog hits home!

  13. docdivatraveller Avatar

    What a beautifully reflective poem—your words capture the whisper of “चार लोग क्या कहेंगे” with such raw honesty and make me want to explore Goa through your eyes.

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