काजवे सभोवती लक्ष दिवे पेटले,
अंधारी रानातील वाटेवर पावले.

वाकुनी नभातूनी डोकावतो चांदवा,
चालली वनातूनी राधा बघ सुंदरा.

वाटेच्या शेवटास दूर डोंगरावरी,
राधेला भेटण्यास वाट पाहतो हरी…

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Comments

5 responses to “अधीर मन”

  1. The title is so intriguing. I wish there was a translation in Hindi or English

    1. Let me try to explain it for you in Hindi or English in some time

      1. That will be great

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    seethlakshmi

    There’s an added beauty in poetries recited over the ones just written. Especially, when it comes to regional languages, poetry recital is a must. Though I only get a vague meaning of the poem, I could definitely enjoy the lyrical beauty of the language. Liked your recital. Would prefer having a translation of the poem.

    1. Thank you for your compliments. Will try to give translation or some explanation to it..

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